Q: What is the difference between “percent” and “percentage”?
A: We regard “percent” as being a unit (equivalent to “kilograms”) and “percentage” as being a description of something that is measured in percent (equivalent to “weight”). As a rule of thumb, this would mean that “percent” (or the percent sign) would usually be used after a number: “In 10% of participants…” When discussing these values more broadly, “percentage” would be appropriate: “The percentages in Table 4 are from the study results in 2007.”
Q: When a percentage is associated with a drug, does it belong before the drug name or after it? The examples used in sections 15.4.9 and 15.4.10 seem to contradict each other.
A: Typically, the percentage would follow the drug name, as described in section 15.4.10: metronidazole lotion, 0.75%. The example in section 15.4.9 is slightly different as it describes the percentages of the components in a single product: “an artificial tear product containing 0.42% hydroxyethylcellulose and 1.67% povidone.”
Q: The 10th edition refers to both “press release” and “news release.” Are these used interchangeably or is there a distinction?
A: We consider these interchangeable terms, but in the next edition we may use “news release” exclusively because information is distributed well beyond print media.
Q: Do you drop the periods in the abbreviation LLC (limited liability company)? I see that you recommend dropping the period after Co (company) and Inc (incorporated) and wondered if this would be treated similarly.
A: Yes.
Q: Your manual (p 342) recommends that a colon not be used after because or forms of the verb include. Does this recommendation include situations in which the word include precedes a bulleted list?
A: Yes, it would be applicable whether the copy that follows the verb include precedes a bulleted list or run-in text. The key is that a verb should not be separated from its object or predicate nominative. For example, we would recommend the following:
There are many treatments for skin irritation. The treatment prescribed may include creams, sprays, and gels.
There are many treatments for skin irritation. The treatment prescribed may include
- creams
- sprays
- gels
Another option would be the following:
There are many treatments for skin irritation: creams, sprays, gels.
—Cheryl Iverson, MA